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Makala na wanafunzi wa University of Dar es Salaam.

University of Dar es Salaam

AUGUSTINO REKADUSENGE (talk • contribs • count • logs • email)

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Muungano wa Afrika	0.1	Muddyb	Juhudi zaidi inatakiwa!
Nkrumah	0	Muddyb	Makala ilikuwepo! Alichoongeza hakikuwa na umuhimu.
OAU	0	Muddyb	Haujafanya badiliko lolote lile makalani.
Mukandala	0	Muddyb	Si mtu maarufu sana katika jamii. Wikipedia inaangalia umaarufu wa mtu. Hasa yule mwenye kupewa kipaumbele kwenye vyombo vya habari. Hii haiko sawa. Pole!
Msaada wao	0	Muddyb	Makala haieleweki. Unamzungumzia Nyerere au namana gani?

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Umoja wa Vijana wa Umoja wa Mataifa	Translated from en article UNYA	2	Muddyb	Hoya mwana nimekupatia mbili kwa sababu huja kaza kiviiile! Kama vipi komaa, kaka.
AIESEC		2	Muddyb	Translate from en article AIESEC	Hoya, babu ongeza juhudi.

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Mkurugenzi		0.1	SJ	nothing there so far.
Uchumi wa Kenya		0.5	NM	a very narrow topic... only under kenyatta?

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Kiingereza		2.5	JK

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Rose_Mhando	worked with Kemyjr, translated from en Rose Mhando	1.4	EKF	Include some pictures
Matumizi ya ardhi	worked with Kemyjr, translated from en Land use	2.0	JK
God_Will_Make_a_Way_-_Kali_ya_Don_Moen	worked with Kemyjr, translated from en	1.5	JA
I_Will_Sing	worked with Kemyjr, translated from en	1.5	JA
God_Is_Good_-_Worship_with_Don_Moen	worked with Kemyjr, translated from en	1.0	JA	Would be great if you translated the song titles, etc too. As is, the majority of the article is still in English

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Riwaya ya Blindness		3	Muddyb	Umejitahidi kwa kiasi kikubwa kuiboresha makala hii. Hivyo, unastahili pongezi. Kumbuka kutaja marejeo mara kwa mara katika makala.
Mwanza		0	Muddyb	Hukumu juu ya makala ya Mwanza bado haijafanyika. Kweli, umeanzisha au umeboresha makala hii? Sioni lolote au alama yoyote kwenye makala ile. Jazia nyama kwenye mifupa (ahsante Kipala)!
FIJI		0	Muddyb	Makala haina muundo wa Wikipedia kabisa. Jitahidi kuboresha - angalau tupate la kusema!
Shule ya uandishi wa habari na mawasiliano ya umma	source, school of journalism and mass communication.	2.9	Muddyb	Makala nzuri sana. Lakini, vichwa vimeandikwa kwa maandishi madogo. Pia, hakuna kitu kama Jamii. Ni muhimu sana. Jamii jamani jamii.
Edger Luhende Ngelela	Edger Luhende Ngelela	3	Muddyb	Umeiboresha kwa kiasi kikubwa sana. Pia, hata kuweka vile vinavyotakiwa. Dhahili ulielewa ulichoambiwa ni nini. Tunafurahia sana na ongeza juhudi.
Joshua Nkomo	Translated from en:wiki Joshua_Nkomo	2.5	Muddyb	Bado kuna makosa madogomadogo. Hasa tatizo la sarufi.
Baltasar and Blimunda	Imetafsiriwa kutoka en:wiki	1.5	Muddyb	Sehemu kubwa bado haileweki. Jaribu kutafsi neno kama TRIVIA na kadhalika. Pia, inaonekana hujaisafisha kiini kibovu cha GOOGLE TRANSLATE. Pole!
Lalibela, Ethiopia	Imetafsiriwa en:wiki	2.9	Muddyb	Kuna baadhi ya maneno yamebaki kuwa ya Kiingereza. Kwa mfano: Dynasti na Emperor. Pia kuna vijisehemu ambavo vinatafsirika, lakini hujatilia mkazo kwenye tafsiri. Lazima uwe chachu jamani ili mambo yawe sawa! Ongeza juhudi.
Ben Carson	Kutoka	2.5	Muddyb	Umejitahidi sana. Hongera
Winnie Mandela		0	Muddyb	Kuna uwezekano mkubwa wa makala hii kuwepo. Jaribu kutafuta zaidi.
Westlife	en:wiki	3	Muddyb	Umepiga hatua. Ila punguza uvivu wa kutoweka viungo vya interwiki kwenye makala. Unajisahau sana kuwea interwiki. Dada, hiyo ni muhimu sana.
Where The Dreams Come True Tour	Umetafsiriwa kutoka en:wiki	2.0	Muddyb	Umepiga hatua. Ila bado kuna kuwa na kasoro za hapa na pale (hasa katika namna ya kutaja "virai" vya kimuziki)! Taratibu ndiyo mwendo, utafika!
Coast to Coast (album)	Kutokaen:wiki	2.9	Muddyb	Punguza kuweka makorokoro yote yale ya Wikipedia ya Kiingereza. Unaweza kutafsiri kitu kama chati, historia ya matoleo, kurekodi (siyo lazima), na sehemu za single. Lakini ni hatua nzuri. Kingine: sio lazima kuchukua kichwa cha makala kama kilivyo kwenye en:wiki. Maana yangy hivi, umetafsiri makala ya wimbo wa My Love, lakini umeweka mabano ya (wimbo wa...) wakati hakuna makala nyingine ya My Love. Hii si lazima. Unaweza kuchukua jina moja kwa moja tu, bila kuweka mabano. Unatakiwa uweke mabano sehemu ambapo unahisi makala itakuwepo nyingine, dada yangu.
If I Let You Go		2.5	Muddyb
My Love (Wimbo wa Westlife)		2.5	Muddyb
Flying Without Wings		2.5	Muddyb
Swear It Again		2.5	Muddyb
I Lay My Love on You		2.5	Muddyb
When You're Looking Like That		2.5	Muddyb
Fool Again	Kutoka Fool_Again	2	Muddyb
Uptown Girl	Kutoka Uptown_Girl	3	Muddyb	Safi sana. Hatua nzuri.
Unbreakable	Kutoka en:Unbreakable_(Westlife_song	2.2	Muddyb
I Have a Dream	Kutoka en:I Have A Dream (ABBA song)#Westlife version	3	Muddyb	Sasa naona hatua zinaongezeka eeh! Ila usikate tamaa kama jinsi ulivyosema kwenye E-mail!
Mandy (Toleo la Westlife)	Kutoka en:Mandy (Westlife Version)	2.5	Muddyb
Us Against the World	Kutoka en:Us Against The World (Westlife Song)	3	Muddyb
Queen of My Heart	Kutoka en:Queen of My Heart	2.5	Muddyb
What Makes a Man	Kutoka en:What Makes a Man	2.5	Muddyb
Tonight/Miss You Nights	Kutoka en:Tonight/Miss_You_Nights	2	Muddyb
Against All Odds (Take a Look at Me Now)	en:Against All Odds (Take a Look at Me Now)#Westlife and Mariah Carey version	3	Muddyb
Turnaround	Kutoka en:Turnaround (Westlife album)	2	Muddyb
Gifted Hands, The Ben Carson Story	Makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Umefanya vizuri. Sikutegemea kama ungeweza kuanzisha makala hii kupitia kitabu ulichosoma. Ni tegemeo letu kuwa mwandishi mzuri!
World of Our Own	Kutoka en:World_of_Our_Own	2	Muddyb
More Than Words	Kutoka en:More_Than_Words	3	Muddyb	Kaza buti
Bop Bop Baby	Kutoka en:Bop_Bop_Baby	1.5	JK
Axum	Kutoka en:Axum	3	Muddyb
Adwa	Kutoka en:Adwa	3	Muddyb
Ezana		2	Muddyb
Yeha		2	Muddyb
The Karaoke Collection	Kutoka en:The_Karaoke_Collection	2	Muddyb
Fly Me to the Moon	Kutoka en:Fly_me_to_the_moon	2.5	Muddyb
The Way You Look Tonight	Kutoka en:The_Way_You_Look_Tonight	2	Muddyb
Allow Us to Be Frank	Kutoka en:Allow_Us_to_Be_Frank	2.5	Muddyb
Amazing	Kutoka en:Amazing	2	Muddyb
Something Right	Kutoka en:Something Right (Westlife song)	2	Muddyb
All Out of Love	Kutoka en:All_Out_of_Love	2.5	Muddyb
Come Fly with Me	Kotoka en:Come_Fly_With_Me_(song)	1.5	Muddyb
I'm Already There	Kutoka en:I'm_Already_There	2	Muddyb
Delta la Nile	Kutoka en:Nile_Delta	3	Muddyb
Damietta	Kutoka en:Damietta	2.5	Muddyb
Usultani wa Adal	Kutoka en:Adal_Sultanate	2.5	Muddyb
Back Home	Kutoka en:Back_Home_(Westlife_album)	2	Muddyb
Ismaïlia	Kutoka en:Ismaïlia	2.5	Muddyb
Daraja la Mfereji wa Suez	Kutoka en:Suez_Canal_Bridge	2	Muddyb
Ghuba ya Suez	Kutoka en:Gulf_of_Suez	2	Muddyb
Ziwa Timsah	Kutoka en:Lake_Timsah	3	Muddyb
Faras	Kutoka en:Faras	2	Muddyb
Washeba	Kutoka en:Sabaeans	2	Muddyb
Amarna	Kutoka en:Amarna	2	Muddyb	Makala haijapangiliwa vizuri kabisa. Jitahidi kupunguza mchecheto wakati wa kuandika!
Hawara	Kutoka en:Hawara	2.5	Muddyb
Amhara	Kutoka en:Amhara_people	2	Muddyb	Tatizo linaendelea. Punguza mchecheto.
Nicky Byrne	Kutoka en:Nicky_Byrne	2.5	Muddyb
Mark Feehily	Kutoka en:Mark_Feehily	2	Muddyb
Shane Filan	Kutoka en:Shane_Filan	2	Muddyb
Kian Egan	Kutoka en:Kian_Egan	1	Muddyb
Seasons in the Sun	Kutoka en:Seasons_In_The_Sun#Westlife_version	2.5	Muddyb	Kasoro ndogondogo nyingi mno!
When You Tell Me That You Love Me	Kutoka en:When_You_Tell_Me_That_You_Love_Me#Westlife_Version	3	Muddyb
Evergreen	Kutoka en:Evergreen_(Westlife_song)	1.5	Muddyb
No Place That Far	en:No_Place_That_Far_(song)	2	Muddyb
What About Now (Daughtry song)	Kutoka en:What_About_Now_(Daughtry_song)	3	Muddyb
Daytime Friends	Kutoka en:Daytime_Friends	1.5	Muddyb	Makala inakosea kusema. Maelezo ya mwanzo yanataka ni albamu ya Kenny Rogers na si wimbo. Makala hii ni wimbo kwa Westlife tu, na si Kenny, dada. Umeula wa chuya!
World of Our Own (wimbo)	Kutoka en:World_of_Our_Own_(song)	2	Muddyb
Face to Face (Albamu ya Westlife)	Kutoka en:Face_to_Face_(Westlife_album)	2	Muddyb
The Love Album	Kutoka en:The_Love_Album_(Westlife_album)	2.5	Muddyb
Released	Kutoka Released_(Westlife_album)	1.5	Muddyb
Westlife (albamu)	Kutoka en:Westlife_(album)	2.5	Muddyb
Hey Whatever	Kutoka en:Hey_Whatever	1.5	Muddyb
Unbreakable – The Greatest Hits Vol. 1	Kutoka en:Unbreakable_–_The_Greatest_Hits_Vol._1	3	Muddyb
Ziara ya Face to Face	Kutoka en:Face_To_Face_Tour	1.5	Muddyb
The Love Tour	Kutoka en:The_Love_Tour	1.5	Muddyb
Obvious	Kutoka en:Obvious_(Westlife_song)	1.5	Muddyb
Where We Are	Kutoka en:Where_We_Are	3	Muddyb
I'll Be There	Kutoka en:I'll_Be_There_(The_Jackson_5_song)	2.5	NM-Muddyb	The article had small mistakes which is normal for the newbie. I've correctd them!
Mariah Carey	Kutoka []	3	NM-Muddyb	Why did you not translate the whole article? Muddyb: Imefanyika. The article got an improvement!! She made it.
Always Be My Baby	Kutoka []	2.5	NM-Muddyb	The article has full criteria. It's deserve the best!
I Still Believe	Kutoka []	2.5	NM-Muddyb
Anytime You Need a Friend	Kutoka []	1.5	NM
I Stay in Love	Kutoka en:I Stay in Love	2.5	Muddyb	Umepiga hatua nzuri sana katika uandishi wa makala za muziki. Big up, mama!
If It's Over	Kutoka en:If_It's_Over	1.8	Muddyb
Bringin' On the Heartbreak	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
One Sweet Day	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
Mariah Carey (albamu)	Kutoka	2	Muddyb	[]
Vision of Love	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
Shake It Off	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
Through the Rain	Kutoka []	2	Muddyb
Thank God I Found You	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
Don't Forget About Us	Kutoka []	2.5	Muddyb
Just Stand Up!	Kutoka []	2	Muddyb
There's Got to Be a Way	Kutoka []	1.5	Muddyb
Say Somethin'	Kutoka []	2	JA
Honey (Wimbo wa Mariah Carey)	Kutoka []	1.5	JA

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kiingereza		2.0	JK

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Ubingwa wa WWE	translated from english article WWE Championship	2	Muddyb	Makala ina mineno mingi ya Kiingereza. Tena, yamebakiwa kuwa vilevile kama yalivyo bila hata kutoa mfano wa neno angalau tungejua ni nini. Je, kwa wale ambao hawajui sheria na taratibu za mchezo huu wataelewa nini? Tafakari!
Atomu na Nyukliasi	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Lakini fikiria kuanzisha makala na kichwa chake. Kwa mfano nini maana ya "Atomu na Nyukliasi"? Hii ndiyo sababu tunataja mwanzoni mwa makala. Mfano: Atomu na Nyukliasi ni hali fulani ya.... ambayo inatokana na... Basi hivyo ndivyo tunavyofanya hapa kwenye Wikipedia!
Ukomeshaji wa Biashara ya Watumwa	makala mpya	2.5	Muddyb	Jina la makala na kichwa chake vinapishana! Kifupi, hukuelezea katika hatua ya awali ya makala. Mfano: Ukomeshaji wa Biashara ya Watumwa ni kampeni dhidi ya ukomeshaji wa utumwa -liongozwa na watu wa magharibi katika kukataza biashara hiyo. Halafu kadha-wa-kadha-wa-kadha. Si ni rahisi kurudia au kuandika upya kichwa cha makala? Basi anza upya - angalau tuweke maksi za juu! Hongera.
Utawala wa Kijiji - Tanzania	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Hatua nzuri na ulivyoelezwa ulielewa! Basi hongera na jitahidi kurudia zile nyingine ambazo hazikuwekwa kichwa.
Watawala wa Bukini 1800-1880	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Kumbuka kuweka kichwa cha makala.
Viungo Vinavyosafisha Mwili	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Jamani kichwa cha makala. Yaani, wewe unaweza sana, lakini vipi kaka kuhusu kichwa cha makala?
Meno	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Kaka unatisha! Nimekubali kaka. Kiswahili safi, maandishi safi, lakini vipi kuhusu kichwa cha makala? Jamani mtindo huu mbaya. Karibuni makala zako zote hazina vichwa. Jitahidi kuweka vichwa.
Pwani na Bara ya Afrika Mashariki 1800-1845	makala mpya	3	Muddyb	Kichwa cha makala bado tatizo. Halafu una-katabia ka kuweka sahihi ya jina lako kwenye makala, kaka. Hii si sahihi. Kumbukumbu ya ukurasa inakutaja kama wewe ndiyo mwanzilishi na kadhalika. Hivyo usiweke sahihi, kaka eeh! Hongera tena.
Kuku Mashuhuri Tanzania	makala mpya	2.5	Muddyb	Makala zako nzuri sana. Lakini tatizo kubwa ni ule mfumo wa uandikaji moja kwa moja bila hata kuweka kichwa cha makala mwanzoni mwake. Hii inapunguza alama, kaka. Zingatia kuanza na vichwa vya makala!
Halogeni	makala mpya	3.0	JK
Neptune	makala mpya	3.0	NM
Misri (1805-1881)	makala mpya	3.0	NM
Utungisho katika Wanyama	makala mpya	3.0	NM
Mfumo wa Mmeng'enyo wa Chakula	makala mpya	3.0	NM
Antibaotiki	makala mpya	3.0	JA
Kipimajoto	makala mpya	2.5	JA
Magonjwa ya Zinaa	makala mpya	3	JA-Muddyb	Not translated/written by Kehengu (Muddyb): Yeye ndiye mwanzilishi wa makala hiyo. Japokuwa kulikuwa na makala nyingie yenye jina la maradhi zinaa - bado haikuwa babukubwa kupitia hii ya Moses!
Magonjwa ya Kuku	makala mpya	3.0	JA

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Albino		1.5	JK

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Utalii		1.1	Muddyb	Makala fupi. Kwa mashindano haya, inataka makala ndefu kidogo. Ila ni vyanzo vizuri.
Chuo Kikuu cha Zanzibar		3	Muddyb	Chanzo kizuri sana. Halafu naona umekimbia tena eeh! Ongeza juhudi.

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Uharibifu wa ardhi	Land degradation	2.5	Muddyb	Kaz nzuri, lakini mbona kimya tena?
Uchumi	worked with Happymchiwa, translated from Uchumi Supermakets	1.0	NM
Mjane	worked with Happymchiwa, translated from Widow]	--	JA	Makala hayajaandikwa bado

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Alizeti	1.5	JA	Could use some cleaning up
Korosho	1.5	JA
Ndimu	1	JA
Kaa_(Mnyama_mwenye_magamba)	1	JA	An example of the sentences you could improve on "Kaa ni decapod crustaceans wa oda ya "Brachyura" ambao kwa ukawaida wana mikia midgo mno"
Mamba_(mjusi)	1	JA
Sungura_pori	1	JA
Sungura	2	JA
Fisi	1.5	JA
Mbweha	1.5	JA
Kangaruu	1.5	JA
Mende	1.5	JA
Kima	2.0	BT	Nice article; the pictures are only links, hence don't show in the article; no categories or interwikis
Chui	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Panya_pori	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Nungunungu	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Panya	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Kifaru	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Konokono	1.5	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January) - not as extensive as the others; same problems with links
Pundamilia	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Tini	1.5	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good basic article, no links though
Papai	1.5	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good basic article, no links though
Plamu	1.5	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good basic article, no links though
Boga	2.0	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good extensive article; picture and reference links not in wiki-format though; no categories or interwikis
Nyanya	1.5	BT	LATE SUBMISSION (30 January); good basic article, no links though